His Airness V2

Michael Jordan is better, and the size of the moon too, but i think that moon is very perfect, i change this, and i change the colour of t-shirt to navy blue

La idea es buena, pero no la veo...

me gusta la idea pero nse.... le falta algo

Jordan esta muy bien dibujado pero Le falta algo ...


 

no me va mucho la verdad


 

a mi lo k emenos me gusta es el propio estilo de dibujo. Es rollo south park, pero no me acaba de gustar.

buena idea!!! pero no me acaba de cautivar para comprarla!!!

Muy bueno :D.

A mí me gustaba la cara ante sy ahora también, aunque ahora casi ni se ve... se aprecia más la gota que el propio rostro jeje.


Y la luna, sigue llamando demasiado la atención...

No me mola mucho.

lo siento pero jordan merece algo mas

¿y quién narices se va a poner esto?

no me gusta, pero esta bien

The idea is great, trying to tell why I dislike it, but I only find a couple mistakes which are not that important, like the moon could be thinner, or the sweat drop smaller.


Much better with the Chicago skyline an the texturized moon, I love that. Great job you are doing there. Keep up!


Still Being analizying why I dislike it and I think is Jordan's face, too complex. I know he was always with his tongue out and that's probably why you put it. Going straight to the point:


First: is the tongue position, I think he should be biting his tongue like saying: "damn it", showing a couple teeth.


Second: The eyebrows, should not be straight which mean more anger than desparation or surprise for getting moon hanged. Lower them  on the outside and rise them on the center. Try not making a single one.


Third: Jordan had big eyes. I know is against your kind of drawing style, don't know if you can do anything about this.


Fourth: Small line on his forehead: he wrinkled his skin there.


Fifth: As I said before, the drop and the moon.


 


I know is a lot of work, go on, specially on the second point.


Good luck.


 


 

esta graciosa, esta bastante bien

Pues no lo cojo...

es simplemente buena jejejjeje suerte

no me la compraria

A los fans de Jordan creo que les podria gustar la idea, aunque yo no estoy entre ellos. Eso si, en cuanto al dibujo, es muy mejorable y habria que retocarlo bastante.

YEAH ! ;)